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Review for workofart-rp
Please keep in mind these are all just my personal opinions and suggestions.
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First Impression [7/10]


The URL is intriguing and it makes me think that this RP is about art and how people are their own art? I’m just guessing. The icon is nice, it fits the URL.


Graphics [5/10]


You don’t really have graphics. This is neither a good or bad thing, however, I do believe a RP needs some sort of graphic to make the RP’er to stay. However, if you have a great plot, graphics dont mean anything. The graphics you do have are simple and clean looking. I would suggest adding a nice eye catching graphic.


Theme [2/5]


I’ve seen this theme before. Nothing special. The color scheme is dull, doesn’t really do much for me. I mean it’s nice and it kinda goes it like a blank canvass? I dont’ know.


Plot [20/25]


Your plot is interesting. I like the idea of it. It’s short but it gives the reader just enough information. It’s very unique, good job!


Characters[20/25]


Your bios are good length. They give enough information. 


Rules[15/15]


The rules are short and easy to follow.


Admins[9/10]


You seem very sweet! You seem like you want to make this a fun and great RP! Also you’re helpful! However, I think you should cut your posts. Maybe just make one post a day saying ‘hey!….” This doesn’t include bios and all.


Sidenotes:


Some of you links in the NAVI don’t work. It takes me to a different page, so definitely check that out. I hope you take the advice I gave and apply to your RP. You might want to get a Graphic Admin if you’re not great with graphics. I really like this RP. It’s nothing I’ve really seen before. Would I join this RP? Sadly no because I have my own RP to work on and I have work :; However, I HOPE THE BEST FOR YOU RP!


OVERALL: 78/100

Review for workofart-rp

Please keep in mind these are all just my personal opinions and suggestions.

First Impression [7/10]

The URL is intriguing and it makes me think that this RP is about art and how people are their own art? I’m just guessing. The icon is nice, it fits the URL.

Graphics [5/10]

You don’t really have graphics. This is neither a good or bad thing, however, I do believe a RP needs some sort of graphic to make the RP’er to stay. However, if you have a great plot, graphics dont mean anything. The graphics you do have are simple and clean looking. I would suggest adding a nice eye catching graphic.

Theme [2/5]

I’ve seen this theme before. Nothing special. The color scheme is dull, doesn’t really do much for me. I mean it’s nice and it kinda goes it like a blank canvass? I dont’ know.

Plot [20/25]

Your plot is interesting. I like the idea of it. It’s short but it gives the reader just enough information. It’s very unique, good job!

Characters[20/25]

Your bios are good length. They give enough information. 

Rules[15/15]

The rules are short and easy to follow.

Admins[9/10]

You seem very sweet! You seem like you want to make this a fun and great RP! Also you’re helpful! However, I think you should cut your posts. Maybe just make one post a day saying ‘hey!….” This doesn’t include bios and all.

Sidenotes:

Some of you links in the NAVI don’t work. It takes me to a different page, so definitely check that out. I hope you take the advice I gave and apply to your RP. You might want to get a Graphic Admin if you’re not great with graphics. I really like this RP. It’s nothing I’ve really seen before. Would I join this RP? Sadly no because I have my own RP to work on and I have work :; However, I HOPE THE BEST FOR YOU RP!

OVERALL: 78/100

07 06 13, 9 months ago
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