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First look for sinnersrpg
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Theme/Colour Scheme [5/5]

I really love the theme. I just saw this theme earlier today. But the color scheme and theme looks really good.

Sidebar Graphic [5/5]

I like the graphic. It’s so pretty. It also give me a good idea of what the RP is about. 

Plot [8/10]

I like how you dived the plot. I think it’s a great plot, however, I found myself skimming words. It was very tedious to read. I would suggestion shortening it? Maybe make it 2 paras?

Navigation [4/5]

I like the Navi. It doesn’t go off into a different page. It works. 

Administration: [2/5]

You seem very excited for this RP! Which every admin should be! I would suggest cutting your posts like saying to come check out guys out. Get a promo blog! Or use RPHs to get people interested!

Side notes: I was fairly excited to do this review. I think it’s a great idea for a RP! Would I join this rp? Maybe! I’ll wait till you have more bios out to decide!  GOOD LUCK WITH EVERYTHING!

Overal- 26/30

First look for sinnersrpg

Theme/Colour Scheme [5/5]

I really love the theme. I just saw this theme earlier today. But the color scheme and theme looks really good.

Sidebar Graphic [5/5]

I like the graphic. It’s so pretty. It also give me a good idea of what the RP is about. 

Plot [8/10]

I like how you dived the plot. I think it’s a great plot, however, I found myself skimming words. It was very tedious to read. I would suggestion shortening it? Maybe make it 2 paras?

Navigation [4/5]

I like the Navi. It doesn’t go off into a different page. It works. 

Administration: [2/5]

You seem very excited for this RP! Which every admin should be! I would suggest cutting your posts like saying to come check out guys out. Get a promo blog! Or use RPHs to get people interested!

Side notes: I was fairly excited to do this review. I think it’s a great idea for a RP! Would I join this rp? Maybe! I’ll wait till you have more bios out to decide!  GOOD LUCK WITH EVERYTHING!

Overal- 26/30

07 17 13, 1 year ago   1 note
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